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I come from Jombang to Surabaya just for learning for knowledge and experience.
I graduated from Vocational Hight School Telecommunication
Darul Ulum Jombang in multimedia departement. And now I am studying in Electronic Engineering Polythecnic Institute of Surabaya that the best Polythecnic institute
in my country, it is Indonesia. I feel so happy when I can study in here
My hobby's are play with my creativity expecially about
broadcasting. I like singing and also
cycling because it can be our self healthy.
I have a beautiful family, they are father, mother, older
brother, and older sister. My father's name is Moh.Shodiq. He is very handsome. He is my superstar but he passed away when
I am still child. He passed away because of danger disease. Actually I am so sad but I think it is the will
of god. My mother's name is Lilik Mansuchah. She is the most beautiful
mother in the world. My older brother's name is Moh. Yusuf Rahman. He always
understand all of about me because of it I love him so much. And the last My older sister,
her name is Fatimatuz Zahrah she is the most beautiful sister who I have. They
are very important for me, without they I am nothing. They are making me
very happy. My house is my paradise because of them.
This is my story that I can told you all. Maybe in here there are many mistakes, so Please forgive me for my everything. At the last I say Bye Byeeeeee.

hai ella ella umblrella,
BalasHapusbetewe how beautifull your name ?
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BalasHapusI think you should add more content in your mindmap. It will be beautiful as your name :)))
BalasHapusNice story. I think your mind map content's font its too small :3
BalasHapussimple mind map but i like your story :)) comment back almirarahmanafi1.blogspot.com
BalasHapusnice story but i think is not enough ;DD
BalasHapusyour sentence line 16 about " can be our self healthy. " i think it must be better if you change word can with make and erase word be . hehe muaahhh salim elaa eloo :*
BalasHapusEllaaa, based on Okky and Dandy comment, what is the meaning of your name? i want to know too ;)
BalasHapusI think your father proud of you now because he have child like you..:))
BalasHapusIt's nice story Ella. :)
BalasHapusBut... o_O there's some wrong gramatical in this sentence : " I born in Jombang on January 25th 1996 so now my age is 18."
You must be improve like this : " I was born in Jombang on January 25th 1996 so I'm 18 y.o. now".
But overall I think is OK :D (y)
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your ice...hmmm -_-
BalasHapusi think your nickname must be "ILLA" not "ELLA" hahaha
BalasHapusaloha ella^^
BalasHapusgreat story, but it will be better if you correct your typo's word on third pharagraph "hight" must "high" and on fourth paragraph " I like a singing" you must remove "a" and it must be "i like singing" :D *aja aja hwaiting
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good job my friend.. keep fightinggg (^o^)9
BalasHapussimple mind map.. nice la ^^
BalasHapusOoh, nice one ela..
BalasHapusI haven't to comment at all
elaa i guess i found some error tense. i guess you can used verb 2 on past. Thx, U can correct my blog too, visit myskullmie.blogspot.com :)
BalasHapushello ella ^~^)/ finally, I'm here~ nice story family is the best right? :) deep condolences for your father~
BalasHapusfighting ella!